Justin Ninja wrote:Ninja
Attack: 2 Defence: 2 Body: 7 Mind:3
Starting Weapon: Shortsword
Starting Armor: Is allowed none
Movement: 2 red dice
The Ninja may dual-wield weapons, when dual wielding you may attack twice either on the same monster or two different monsters, but you cannot move before the second attack or it is canceled and you may not double attack that turn.
Is dual-wield meant to be used with the multiple-attacks rules clarification from the Barbarian Quest Pack? If so, then that means dual-wield could provide a 3 combat dice attack against a single monster. (If you ignore the rule clarification, you also ignore a lot of HeroQuest players.) Also, how would dual-wield combine with an artifact like Orc's Bane which also provides two attacks?
Justin Ninja wrote:Also when dual-wielding the Ninja gets +1 to defense.
The ninja would always dual-wield, so this amounts to a bonus that could only be taken away like armor. Basically, it's armor of a different sort.
Justin Ninja wrote:The ninja is unseen by monsters unless the ninja is in their line of sight when he either opens a door or attacks.
Cool ninja theme. If it playtests as unbalanced, consider requiring a limitation such as adjacency to furniture/walls. Also, what happens if a Ninja who is followed by another Hero in a 1 square corridor is targeted by a ranged attack? Does the attack bypass the Ninja who otherwise qualifies for the line of sight rule? What happens if the same Ninja and following Hero in the same corridor are met with a melee attack? Seems like the Nija must be attacked anyway. Finally, does a Ninja become seen if he triggers a trap?
Justin Ninja wrote:When the Ninja attacks a monster while unseen the defending monster loses 1 combat dice for that roll of their defending dice.
Not sure if this is necessary. The basic unseen rule captures the Ninja flavor with less. Your mileage may vary.
Justin Ninja wrote:The Ninja may only equip daggers and the shortsword.
Armor, any other weapons, and the tool kit may not be equipped by the ninja. ( I don't know about other 'home made' equipment but these are the original allowed items)
If an artifact says it is anything but a dagger or a shortsword it is not allowed to be used by the Ninja.
I feel the armor and weapon restrictions are sufficient, as this precedent already exists with the Wizard. I don't think it's necessary to restrict the tool kit, as the goal should be to add less special rules. You should word the artifact restriction to read: If
a weapon or armor artifact says it is anything but a dagger or a shortsword it is not allowed to be used by the Ninja.
Overall, I think the Ninja starts out too strong. Dual-wield allows 3 combat dice with the potential to kill 2 monsters in a single turn. That's better than the Barbarian, who is the standard of martial power. The Ninja also effectively starts out with 3 defend dice, which again outstrips all the official Heroes. What is the cost? A weapon, armor (and tool kit) restriction that won't come into play until later as an equalizer. What is the Ninja to do with all the gold coins?
At higher levels, I think the Ninja is too weak. Unless you provide special Ninja artifact cards, the exclusion of any protective armor is going to make him a paper tiger. However, you are using a game system that I'm unfamiliar with. Perhaps monsters limited to only 1 Body Point is enough to cure this deficiency. Against monsters with multiple Body Points from the North American game system, the Ninja will suffer more at higher levels. The unseen ability won't be as effective when the Ninja needs to stay in the fight, and he'll go down fast.
As a fix, I'd suggest doing away with the dual-wield +1 defend die, but allow armor usable by the Wizard. In that case, I'd change the Wizard's Cloak to an additional artifact called Ninja's Garb or some such nonsense. Bracers should also be allowed to be found or purchased.
Justin Ninja wrote:Please submit your thoughts/ideas on this character, thank you.

(by the way why are all of the smilies oval shaped?)
(My screen stretches everything into oval shapes, because it's extra-wide and my wife wants to see everything filling the screen. At least I can adjust the aspect ratio when needed.)