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30th Anniversary Heroes

PostPosted: April 14th, 2018, 9:34 am
by FollowerOfShe
I had the idea to finish what GameZone started as a PNP, next year is the 30th.

Here are the character cards I have so far:
Assassin: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1tr4GXaEtnSpaiRSZm4HjoCj3kbZsIt3u/view?usp=drivesdk

Barbarian:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1cGyBIHjRoAvxM-odgT5G0ZKpP5e2zWID/view?usp=drivesdk

Defender (Dwarf):
I know that Dwarf and Elf match the old DnD ways of classes, but with the addition of "Female Dwarf" and "Female Elf" and the tons of other characters, the Dwarf/Female Dwarf and Elf/Female Elf feel out of place.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1rm1BpyzOyLcqGgBnK4bD7A6oRDq_WtfX/view?usp=drivesdk
The pink die in the text box, at the bottom, should be blue. That is a dice idea I'm adding for 30th.
It's the "Critical/Skill" die (Sides: Crit, 2 Success, 2 Blank, Fumble.)
In Brown Bottle Flu, after roll there should be 2 red dice icons.

Ranger (Elf):
https://drive.google.com/file/d/12bBt_IR3PLjNaT4M3PhA3cN1IGGmdCwd/view?usp=drivesdk

Re: 30th Anniversary Heroes

PostPosted: April 14th, 2018, 2:21 pm
by mitchiemasha
I like the Barbarian art, not so sure on the icons. General lay out is spot on, good choice. Not a fan of the style used for the Assassin. A little more work needed on the text in box. I'd go for using the actual HQ dice as Icons.

For instance Ranger.
Magical Ability could be reduced to 1 line. Simplyfy to Magic.
After 'cannot choose fire spells' put the next text on a new line.

I'd put the skills in alphabetical order or some other consistency, like Pyrophobia would come after Magic Ability, as they are related, slightly. Hopefully achieving a neater finish.