If you don't like the armour is spelt then it's your own fault for all the times you lied when you claimed you speak English.
Edit:
Just spotted a typo on the mithril armour, I'll fix it tomorrow.
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knightkrawler wrote:It may be argued that if you introduce the Soul Sword as "This short sword...", then the last sentence is abundant as this specification is already in there.
As the EWP, you just could point out the linguistics and set a precedence about reading and interpreting rules. It's what opened my eyes and exactly how my and Andreas' icons and Slev's key words work.
Same for the Rune Sword ("This broadsword...") and Mithril Armour ("This chainmail..."), of course.






knightkrawler wrote:It may be argued that if you introduce the Soul Sword as "This short sword...", then the last sentence is abundant as this specification is already in there.
As the EWP, you just could point out the linguistics and set a precedence about reading and interpreting rules. It's what opened my eyes and exactly how my and Andreas' icons and Slev's key words work.
Same for the Rune Sword ("This broadsword...") and Mithril Armour ("This chainmail..."), of course.
There's a few very good reasons for this.Goblin-King wrote:I agree with this. Seems like the more elegant solution.
While absolute clarity is nice, most players aren't (totally) retarded after all.
knightkrawler wrote:I feel that for Mithril Armour, the sentence beginning with "Such is..." is abundant functionwise because the specification is already in "whenever you defend". However, for fluff and filling the space it's just fine.
It's because it also applies to any additional defense dice to keep it simple, but in an in-game context why would it work for other armour? I think the wording kind of sells the idea. I also think it just sounds nice, such is the power!slev wrote:For the mythril, consider changing he wording as follows:
This armour allows you to roll three combat dice when you defend.
Additionally, while wearing this armour, you count black shields as white shields when you defend.
It's less text, clearer, and does the same thing!
Awesome!knightkrawler wrote:I like all items you've come up with over the last few days and will probably take them into my next batch.
THREE EXTRA defense dice! That would be a tad OP.knightkrawler wrote:You'd have to add "EXTRA" to the first sentence.
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